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Post by Baycrum on Sept 13, 2009 13:41:33 GMT -5
This is my first fanfiction...It's not so good so far.....
It will feature flashbacks before her runaway.
Hope you like it.
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Post by Baycrum on Sept 13, 2009 13:44:09 GMT -5
She was sitting in her room,her new room.A Much betterroom.She pulled herself from her bed,and tossed over her purple blanket made of wool down to the hard tiled floor of her new room.
She then proceeded to pull off her old gown and put it in her closet.She put her cloak over her black haired head careful not to pull it over her antenna.
I'd cut those things off if it didn't kill me from bleeding....
She walked over to the window,looked down at the ground,the window made her feel above the creatures below her.....
Except for the woman who didn't seem to be there......
"Don't worry about them."
"........."
She looked down at them again......
He put his hand on her shoulder.
"They will be gone soon enough"
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Post by Baycrum on Sept 13, 2009 14:03:39 GMT -5
"Daddy!Daddy!Daddy!"Pauline made her way towards her dads desk.
Koolaid!
Dr.Cockroach turned around surprised to see her chugging his chemicals.
"Pauline!NO!!!!"
He pulled her away from the chemicals.
"No koolaid?"She seemed surprised by his worry.
"It's NOT koolaid!"Dr.Cockroach screamed/.
"Come on Doc she doesn't know any better.She still thinks Santa is blue."Link had sneaked in the lab along with Pauline and BOB.
Pauline walked over to BOB and gave him a hug.
"Santa where's my presents?"
BOB was again confused and scratched his glob of a head.
"Umm I'm not Santa...."
Link whispered to BOB."YOU were Santa last year."
"I was? I thought It was you."
"No thats This year!"
"Two Santas?"
Pauline looked up a few inches away from Link.
Link and BOB looked up at the window on the huge castle.
"Who would've thought this would happen?"
"I don't remember being Santa..."
"And that was just a couple of years ago..."
Dr.Cockroach looked at Link and BOB.
"Well she's still an evil witch!"
I wish she wasn't though....
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Post by Twitter Cordova on Sept 13, 2009 22:33:42 GMT -5
LOL! Blue Santa? XDD And koolaid? Now that's funny! Good fanfic Baycrum, but you may wanna say what your story is about and keep the chapters in order. Hope that helps you in fanfic writing ^^
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Post by Baycrum on Sept 14, 2009 4:50:16 GMT -5
Thanks that was just one flashback and probally the last.
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Post by Baycrum on Oct 4, 2009 11:46:02 GMT -5
Chapter 2"Where is Susan?" The Insectiod scientist wondered as he looked above him at the should have arrived by was fighting off the creatures that came from the portals that had popped out of noticed that the castle was surrounded by apartments and office buildings as was Susan wasn't there he could tell that she would have been dwarfed by the enormus size of the looked as though it were made of diamonds."Oh can't be true." shuddered as he backed away from the castle."It's made out of solidified quantonium....."
"He's backing away."Pauline whispered to herself as she remembered why she had gone with Erlin in the first she hated her life so had ran away from home when she knew she could control knew she didn't need her fathers mad needed something different,something Erlin taught made her feel powerful,and it maybe enough to destroy zipped up her cloak and turned was behind her looming over her at a stalking hieght of eight feet.
"You know it's time."he whispered as he got down on his though Pauline was a child he taught her everything his mother had taught him about quatonium and it's mystical potential with the Dark swiftly pulled his chalk out of his hand and drew a circle,inside it letters of an unknown alphabet.
"It's time to go back." |
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Post by Twitter Cordova on Oct 4, 2009 18:08:13 GMT -5
Ooooh! They're living in a new castle now? You didn't mention that. MORE MORE MORE!! ;D
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Post by Baycrum on Oct 5, 2009 18:55:26 GMT -5
I knows!I need to get some more done but I got wrestling now so it may be untill the weekend.But it's only Erlin and Pauline in castle.
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Post by Baycrum on Oct 10, 2009 1:17:46 GMT -5
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Post by Baycrum on Oct 14, 2009 18:59:26 GMT -5
Chapter 3 The room shined nearly blinding Pauline,with a portal being open.
"Where does this go?"Pauline asked as she attempted to touch the portal but Erlin quickly grabbed her arm before she could touch it."The question isn't where it goes but when.The portal was a metallic green color.When looked at carefully you could see events.First it showed Susan's first wedding,then it went to Susan in her spacesuit fighting Gallaxhar.Next it showed Dr.Cockroach putting up a piece of cardboard,ready to conduct a certain experiment,then it showed Dr.Cockroach pulling apart the robot's wire.Pauline realized the portal was showing her the past.
"So with this I'll be able to destroy them,before they know?"Pauline asked as she walked out of the commons area up the stairs.Touching the handle to her room she cut herself ,it had chipped.deciding she didn't have time for cuts she pulled her sleeve over her hand and turned the handle.Pauline ran over to her closet pushing all her wardrobe options over to the side and pushed a small door open with her foot.Getting on her knees she grabbed it:Her Scepter.The scepter began to glow a dark green.
"There,there,you'll soon have what you and I both want."Pauline whispered to her scepter as it softened it's glow to white.Pauline pointed towards her door."Lets have a little test run."Pauline said in a dark tone.She began to glow a dark green,that dark green traveled to the tip of her scepter and brusted the energy out at the door knocking it down.Walking down back to the commons room she saw that Erlin had paused,his chalk centimeters away from the ground he was once writing on.
"Well what are you waiting for?"Pauline asked looking over his shoulder.Erlin failed to turn around as suspected.He was breathing though."When were you born?"Erlin asked.
"Ten years ago."Pauline joked as her scepter turned a light green as she began stroking it."The exact date."Erlin stated growing impatient.Pauline laughed as she stood away from him.
"February 7,2022."Erlin began writing again."I'll set it a year after. That way I'll be able get you after you destroy them"Erlin stated as the portal flashed forward to Pauline's first birthday.
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